Woo hoo! Yay for you! Just wondering how you decided to end it now...looking back over your ideas, I wonder if maybe the friends he's made over the course of the film decide to come save him, even if they aren't under Dawes's orders? Like maybe they recognize his true patriotism and want to save him? Just a thought...
As Benjamin and William Dawes see the lanterns in the Old North Church steeple, a patrol of Redcoats come up the road. Benjamin tells Dawes to go and he draws off the Redcoats in the opposite direction. The British are simultaneously crossing the bay. While William Dawes and Paul Revere let everyone know the British are coming, Benjamin is trying to shake the Redcoats, which he does eventually. Then there's the battle at lexington and concord. After the battle, Benjamin helps with the dead bodies on the battlefield and is commended by Sam Adams and John Hancock for sacrificing himself the night before and tell him it was the work of a true patriot, etc.
Woo hoo! Yay for you! Just wondering how you decided to end it now...looking back over your ideas, I wonder if maybe the friends he's made over the course of the film decide to come save him, even if they aren't under Dawes's orders? Like maybe they recognize his true patriotism and want to save him? Just a thought...
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ReplyDeleteAs Benjamin and William Dawes see the lanterns in the Old North Church steeple, a patrol of Redcoats come up the road. Benjamin tells Dawes to go and he draws off the Redcoats in the opposite direction. The British are simultaneously crossing the bay. While William Dawes and Paul Revere let everyone know the British are coming, Benjamin is trying to shake the Redcoats, which he does eventually. Then there's the battle at lexington and concord. After the battle, Benjamin helps with the dead bodies on the battlefield and is commended by Sam Adams and John Hancock for sacrificing himself the night before and tell him it was the work of a true patriot, etc.